Reyna_Lavesque_381
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I feel you brr, writing stories with phone dey frustrate someone like mad!!
Shey you dey whine me "ni" not no, maybe typographical error
This guy is supposed to have two cheats, but because of the steady development you want to give the story you neglect the most important cheat of all, thus leaving lots of obvious loopholes. The cheat I am talking about is his experience as a God with the 3 O's, especially Omniscience, cuz even though he does not have it any more, the knowledge he would have gained in his years should have been able to help him even more than the intelligence now. I mean why does he need to learn when he already knows all these before and you can't say he does not know it cuz he had omniscience before and you can't tell me he never once thought about the intricacies of science and energy before, so he should have knowledge of all this and not acting like a normal Mc that was suddenly transmigrated into the marvel verse. In short, the steady development you want to give him has been spoilt by his background as a God, you forcing it now just leaves a lot of loopholes in the story.
I don't get, in the beginning he already told his wives about energy, that they are all the same with different names, yet now he is acting naively and dumbly and also allowing someone with way less power level and experience compared to him to lecture him on energy, I mean did he lose part of his memories or something, cuz if not his power leveling is supposed to be smooth sailing without any bottlenecks
Limit it to marvel and DC only, pleasssssee
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Honestly speaking, I am highly disappointed, a great story Like this was spoilt because of racism starting from the late 300 chapters after he went to the United States. He casually killed an innocent person cuz he discriminated against Chinese yet he did the same in his sentence to Africans just few chapter after the above scene.
Is it a bird ? Is it a plane? No!!! It's Superman
Is it a bird ? Is it a plane? No!!! It's Superman!!!!
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1). I don’t see the meaning of constant live broadcast except for face slapping even a random mercenary will live broadcast for his employers when catching the mutators tiger. 2). The author greatly nerfed the mutants while also making it greatly affect the MC all for the sake of face slapping the audience when there is live broadcast going on during his capture. 3). Dumb world, everytime they want to catch MC in either his messiah form or the white form the whole audience, the mutants, shield and even Iron man will be like he can’t escape it this time around/he is surely dead. It’s like their IQ had been reduced more than 10x 4). How the hell were the sentinel able to copy his abilities, it was already proven in the early chapters that pulse can’t deactivate his abilities except for sun absorption because the rest aren’t mutant abilities then why is it that Sentinnels that are meant to be able to copy abilities through mutant genes able to copy his. 5). How the hell is he still running out of light energy, his first character was the freaking sun God and his third character is the god of LIGHT, emphasis on the light and yet he still runs out of light energy. 6). And what the hell is with the case of the cancer and his short lifespan. 7). He has the abilities of Orochi the sun god, Chaos magic and Baldr the god of light and yet he is still so weak, those three Al combined should be able to deal with Thanis with about 3 gems and yet the guy is still being pursued by missles, so that means that when Thanos comes there is no need for superheroes, the government can just throw 1 or 2 nuclear bomb and kill Thanos.
Wow! A system telling it's host to believe in God. There is nothing suspicious about that 😂