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I think he is from a clan called Ogata.

What's the point, now Madara and Hashirama are part of a chat group.

I was very immersed in this, but now you are introducing Pokeballs, come - on now, Ninja fights with Pokeballs don't interest me as much, so I am leaving .

you can just write Ichiraku and Ayame. Uncle hand beat is a no go.

Even if you would like to, you probably couldn't, if you don't have ridiculous cheat. And also I am not you at a point of time I too thought if I transmigrated into Naruto, I want to try all the cool jutsus, teleport anywhere with flying raijin, but as the time moved forward I figured, anyway if I get transmigrated as young Naruto, I would enjoy all the beauty of konoha even if the people look at me different, and gradually ease into my training, from the basics and everything.

sorry 😔, it's not my cup of tea. But it's a well written story, most will like it, rather than taking time to enjoy your new reality and the beauty of the new world you found yourself in, you went directly to ninjutsu research, funny thing I wrote on the review of the second chapter that if he stats using Rasengan in bell test, it'll be stupid and here he is figuring out even rasenshurikan. And if you truly want to write a character who gets strong don't introduce romance just yet, let him try to be strong for the purpose of being strong.

Good start, but it wasn't necessary to tell Hiruzen about the eyes, by tha actual plot he will die in Chunin exam arc, and since Naruto's eyes were already blue I don't see the need. Personality change happens from the age of puberty which is said to be 12 years of age, so gradual change in personality after couple of mission completion, like after wave mission, should have been nice, and before you think other way, you are portraying a 12 year old, not someone like a grown up Kakashi so small inconsistencies in behaviour and small power up won't be a problem, but if he started using Rasengan in the bell test, that'll be stupid. So in my opinion just telling, about the six eyes feels in un-necessary, unless you are trying to make Naruto into a Sasuke like character then yes you will need an excuse. And also please don't change the plot too much, because I have seen many authors starts the story well but after a certain amount of chapter they stagnate and drops the story, so changing a well existed plot will be like creating an entirely new story, that'll be like, a TPP gaming experience written as chapters, believe me I know it doesn't sound as much but it'll get boring real fast.

sorry 😔, lost interest.

no order for the content of the chapters.

That's why I am sad, the story is very well written but me personally don't like character summoning, if it's like a pet, some thing like 'Appa', then ok but even that should be restricted to one or two. If it's like summoning a character card and he progressively gains the said character's techniques and skills are also acceptable. The only reason I gave this suggestion is because it is well written, if not it will be as bad, I have read many stories like that.