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I try to make 1 chapter a week, when I initially started the story I did 2/3 a week because I had vacation.
Huh I researched about it? Did I do somthing wrong?
The first few chapters are just introductions to be honest this is my first book and I try to improve every time. I will take your advice to mind, the relationships with the characters are starting of slow the Mc Ofcourse already knows adachi and noya. For the story il try and focus on the “Now” aspect of it. I personally think it’s far easier to just write about the now instead of the future or past. Thanks for the comment and advice hopefully you enjoyed the chapter.
Yeah he will learn an elemental clone too but I didn’t say that the shadow clone jutsu would be easy to learn so maybe learning a elemental clone first would be easier
Yeah that makes sense will do!
Yes that’s true however only utilizing the gentle fist seems useless Of course majority of Hyugas the majority of still focus on that entirely There is a small minority that evolves their other skills. And not everyone will teach him.
Oh yeah I see what you mean will be fixed thanks for the feedback.
Hey, so I am on vacation right now and I'm attempting to put some chapters out. But once I'm back home il try and do 2 chapters a week. Hopefully, you enjoyed the first chapter and the second one is gonna be even better.