Yoekko
Stupid and smelly.
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The first chapter was a good read, some of the dialogue felt a little off, but maybe it's because I'm conditioned to different styles of writing, not that it made me want to stop reading or ruined the immersion. The thought of an NPC breaking the boundaries of the code they were forced into is somewhat inspiring when you realize that we as people aren't too different. I also noticed some unanswered questions and plot points lingering in the story, so good luck finding those answers.
I usually do describe sounds with words, but for this story, I cannot emphasize the sound of a truck blaring into ones enough, words weren't enough to satisfy me when I was producing this novel, though I'll heed your advice and let the mind of the reader have more freedom instead of guiding their thoughts myself.
Joe Biden leveling his taming skills be like:
The human population hasn't grown for 100+ years? Makes me wonder about what the government of the future is up to...
I like the world building so far.
The man who'll send Issac Soren to a new world, do not forget this name.
The thickens plot
Stop foreshadowing the double Isekai and give it to us already.
"No thank you,"
MC dies and then gets double isekaid.
The first prologue gives a good idea of what the world is and where the characters will be going in the future. The writing is done well I only found one type but then again I might be the one in wrong. Emotions are portrayed well and the plot has been set in motion. I'll be sure to keep updating my reviews as I continue reading on.
Just reviewing myself in an attempt to get my story out there; Anyways, I'll be doing a humble review of my own series thus far. The beginning is formatted in an iffy manner but the second chapter is done better. The author could do a better job in describing the emotions of his characters and the ambiance of the world.