Tsukasa_
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Perhaps it was. I am still not a very good writer, you see. But still, I’ll take this comment into consideration. Thanks very much[img=recommend]
Unless it's intentional, you're making your main lead sound a tad narcissistic.
Here's a tip on writing, don't be too detailed ._. For instance, your character had just eaten. He said, "Ah, finally. That was some great, juicy meat!" It's low-key creepy and unrealistic, y'know? Don't just straight up say "Ten instant noodles". Instead write, "Maybe I ate too much instant noodles..." or the such.
The story's good and all but I sometimes have a hard time envisioning the scenes. One of the main points of writing is imagery. If anything, it's the author's only problem. At some point in the story, I realized you can't handle making your readers feel the tension of a certain scene. I suggest being more descriptive, not too much as that'll be a bit creepy considering this is a first-person point of view.
If you won't tell me I'll block the said person in discord, leave his server, and never return to the fanfic server.
Can you tell me you're not who I think you are?
It's my first time reading a romance novel here on WebNovels. In my own personal opinion, this is probably one of best ones I've read on the site(not that I've read much xD). The characters, though; the characters' personality are so natural. The storyline's interesting and refreshing to read. Honestly, it's just so good