GodonAHill
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Thank you. I try me hardest 😊
Selfishness leads to a life of self. Sometimes, you have to share goodies to grow up together with people around you to have a better life although it might hinder you at first.
Das fine, no need to feel sorry. Thanks for explaining.
We all been there, no need to feel embarrassed. They do have the appeal when you first start them, but over time, 🤢
Because of the cuss word, the comment cannot be seen so don't know where you commented this on, but welp, if you are asking the name Rayen, no it is not a Chinese name. Also I mentioned it many times but they are all scattered, but anyways can go another time. All the chinese cliche's in this novel are kind of an author way of critic. I am not fan either.
To his friend? They are rare breed you know. Gotta appreciate good friends.
If I am not mistaken, what you have is Wuxia Overexposure. Reading too much Chinese novel poisoned you and now you see young masters everywhere. Though gotta admit Wuxia novels over used this template and ruined it.
That is called "Hamartia," character flaw. It is a technique used since ancient greek. All of Shakespeare character has one as well. I don't mind constructive criticism but outright insulting irritates me. I could have just place Miles in there as well, it is not that difficult believe me, but this is planned. So please either be respectful or take your leave.
They do not conflict but each art has compatibility with one of the four branches, making it miss match for others. Since Miles sees himself closer to Body Branch, he thinks alien's art is perfect match for him.
Hi, thanks for the review. First of all, no harem. Definitely not! And there will be romance, I promise. About the power balance, I assure you that, MC will not be OP. He will have edge but not because of some bestowed power, but thanks to his wit and ability to make use of his abilities. But compared to his peers, the distance will never be too far. The energy system in F-Circle will make the story much more interesting. Please keep on supporting me and have fun.
And a strong superpower. Life is unfair.