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It's definitely because of the benefits she lost

It has an interesting storyline . The only error I can spot here is that the author used the simple present tense to narrate the story, which is not suitable for the first person narrative technique. The use of past tense is more suitable for this narrative technique. When describing the characters' reactions to something, the use of simple present tense is not very suitable. I hope the author can work on this to make this novel perfect. Looking forward to more interesting chapters.💚

Good plot. It just needs a lot of proofreading.

I thought I so too. It's probably a mistake

yeah, go girl

please can it be proofread. It's a little bit unclear.

I am also looking forward to the season two of this book. If you need a proof reader, I am available

It is a really good novel. I was reading on Light reader before but the updates was to slow, so I used ficool but then I could not access my I account and now I am using webnovel, all because I wanted to finish this book. I hope next time Author would not demotivate herself. If you were able to do this in your first book, I believe the subsequent ones will be better. Thanks for giving us something different. I have always supported this book and I will always support it