LittleGiant7
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Great story! The grammar is good and there are only a few mistakes in between. The author has done a great job of designing the characters. Our protagonist, Cade, is a guy who for the moment is struggling to make ends meet. The story only has three chapters published, so I can't say much about worldbuilding. All in all, it is a story with a lot of potential.
Wow...
Haha!
Didn't see that coming.
Haha!
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