Harem ?

Harem ?

Harem ?

Harem ?

Normally I wouldn't review but I realized that no one has reviewed before. so this review is purely supportive. I will do a real review after I read some more chapters. I hope I won't be disappointed. So far the book is good.

Harem ?

Harem ?

The story is going in a direction I didn't want at all. If he has unstoppable power, he won't have to deal with any problems. If he doesn't want any new threats to emerge, he should directly kill all talents around the world. for an extraterrestrial element, it must continue to grow stronger. I don't see how changing the world will benefit mc. Mc was only thinking of himself, ignoring either side, and that was perfect. I don't understand why you wrote something like this just to be a motivational scene. I feel like he's showing everyone his 2nd talent soon and almost drama-filled episodes are waiting for us. He will use his special drink to help the heroes in battle. then he can say for humanity and heal all might. I hope I don't run into such abomination because if I do, I may have to leave a nice review.

Harem ?

Harem ?

If the book becomes a harem.. I hope you write it here and I'll leave a review after I read the book🗿🍷

Harem ?

Harem ?

Harem ?

Kill the ron

The story is very predictable. maybe a good novel for an inexperienced reader . predictability is not the only problem. Mc reacts stupid and childish. He can't hide anything. She trusts very easily. He probably wouldn't have survived without the plot armor you gave him. Things like changing the mc's personality later are also nonsense, no one has that much time unless it's a very good story. Also, the story is very similar to a certain manga (I'm not saying it as a slander, but it caught my attention) that the Chinese main character uses 4 elements. the one whose brother is a wheelchair. Anyway, as I said, this story doesn't suit me, but it's still a good read for those who want to read it. (I normally don't read 10 chapters and critique, but really, I have limited patience for an MC who is so stupid, obsessed with being a hero and acts childish) who wants to read can read. I will give an average score in order not to decrease the score, otherwise I would give it much lower. Finally, there is no comedy tag in the story for those who look at the comedy and say enjoy the adventure etc.

disappointment

Is he really going to react like that???

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