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I would have liked it if their relationship was natural and not a task from the system. Is he gonna start actively going after all these heroines?
I like the mc more in the earlier chapters, I do not like this change
It is okay to help them, but why are you trying to hook the mc up with these girls? Although I do not like him still caring about their business, I do understand that as a person who was close to them, he may feel the need to help. I know this is your own story and do not want to be questioned for the decisions you make, but making him create a harem with these girls is too much. It is okay to forgive them, but getting involved in a relationship?
So those words awakened something in you?🤣💀
She enjoyed it and went back on her own, didn't she?
So she seems to like the mc, but ruthlessly rejected him and said some nasty stuff when doing it, which was really unnecessary, it is a headscretcher if she liked him, why say such hurtful things? And she is really annoying, idk why some people like tsunderes, but in her case it is annoying. As long as she remains a friend to the mc and they slowly get over their issues, it would be okay. But I hope the author won't be hasty and try to hook them up too early.
I cant bring myself to like Gwen, as a character.
No, she didn't even tell him lol. She confided in his friend and was angry Takashi didn't notice anything even though she never directly talked to him about it. This is why most people hate her.
Every fanfic mc has to pretend to be a normal person even if they are rich. If they are handsome, they have to hide their true appearance🤣💀
What the... There was no need for