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Idczhen3hตอบกลับถึง Soaring_AngelsSystem: Due to Adventurer Lin Feng's ethics, the experience points gained from killing normal monsters are reduced by 99 percent for the duration of 3 days.- Idczhen6dตอบกลับถึง timeturner
Xu Feng: Worth it
System: Due to Adventurer Lin Feng's ethics, the experience points gained from killing normal monsters are reduced by 99 percent for the duration of 3 days. - Idczhen6dตอบกลับถึง timeturner
Well, actually, he escaped by outwitting the NPCs since the NPC never managed to detain him on the spot. :]
Never once had there been an incident of a system personally imposing a punishment on a player unless they were caught and detained by fellow NPCs. - Idczhen6dตอบกลับถึง kvothe555
He looted the dead body of Yolanda and Benmos, so yes, he have money.
"If you're going to charge me that much, then the place better be decent. Otherwise, don't blame me for not paying you anything." Shi Tian snorted coldly, warning him to not attempt any foul play. - Idczhen11dตอบกลับถึง Maximillion
fixed the sentence structure.
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- Idczhen15dตอบกลับถึง Idczhen
In case you haven’t noticed. I purposely made the first sentence confusing to read to demonstrate my astonishment at this paragraph.
"If you speak the truth…" Mikaru said with some hesitation, unsure if he believed the words, but he smiled and placed his hands on the young lord's shoulder, "Then I look forward to the day." - Idczhen15dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
?????? Now this makes completely no sense. Leon is a count and he’s someone with no status, but he can place his hand on the count’s shoulder despite meeting very briefly?????
"If you speak the truth…" Mikaru said with some hesitation, unsure if he believed the words, but he smiled and placed his hands on the young lord's shoulder, "Then I look forward to the day." - Idczhen15dตอบกลับถึง LotusLin
Kekw, too naive I mean. What’s the point of swearing this to him when they just met? Would’ve been better to use actions instead of speaking empty words.
"I swear to you, on my honor as a Noble." Leon declared, slamming his fist against his chest as he glared intensely at him, "I will develop Othniel Levavot to become a place free from the discrimination against Parthrak and any other race." - Idczhen15dตอบกลับถึง aoi_hoshi_cath88
I always appreciate these types of comment that spot my mistakes. But yeah, it's a shame that the paragraph comment would be deleted once any changes are made upon it.
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Idczhen15dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 1 Bunny From a Mistake
- Idczhen15dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 1 Bunny From a Mistake
- Idczhen15dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 1 Bunny From a Mistake
- Idczhen15dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 1 Bunny From a Mistake
- Idczhen15dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 1 Bunny From a Mistake
- Idczhen15dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 1 Bunny From a Mistake