It is an ad, lmao

I am quite lonely, wanna be friend with me?

Nani kore?

No dirty thought No dirty thought

the acronym sounds like someone wants to yell but fail. just like ACME lol

tbh, this looks like just any average hopeless person would write in their diary.

After reading this first chapter, it seems like there are two valuable lessons I should draw: 1st: Do not over drinking 2nd: never follow suspicious woman in the bar But hey, the story is getting spicy

The comedies begin in chapter 4. It is quite good to be honest. The world background is nice. Hot headed main character and along with overpowered creature is also a thing worth to note

I am quite sure this is reincarnation. Beginning gives me the vibe of potential revenge stereotype. I expect more action and more thrill in next chapters.

It is still quite vague in world building in first chapters. I must say it is good enough. The character is well built but not unique for my taste. It kind of giving me vibe of Mardek the flash game. Keep on running, god speed

I think the bullies in future if he has some would call him as something was burnt aftermath and most people don't use it

first five chapters is so heavy on politics, despite politics is not my taste but I genuinely like the way you write and building this world. Writing quality is well "I can see some basic mediocre" , the cause could be you were writing way too ahead of your hand so Maybe you should spend time to fixies wixies a bit. World building to real world for around 80% and i must say this is a true medieval fantasy in both writing and world too.

The best pun in this story

I read the first chapter. I forgot to put the comment. I must say the mc is tomboyish. Strong and reliable but she makes her friend feel weird somewhat about her habit(as weird as I am, I can feel that she is kind of weird too). Keep up the pace. (yes, I read on Feb 21st/2021). I want to see more of the thrill and the hunt begins

It is really good both in pacing and background. I am one of the early reader. My only sole complain is lacking sfx. that is it. Nothing else

It is kind of similar to Wanted(2008) but a high school kid. I am looking forward to seeing the thrill of the hunt, the promise of payment You are welcome. :)

As an author, I would like critical comments Not some mentally disgusting site advertising. I am not moving to any site. I have my mind, I make it. I will delete any site advertising or even ignore it. Thank for reading my comment. I hope you all enjoy this first to last chapter. FYI, I will be back posting chapters from next Monday. I am hoping to see more realistic comments. Not by spam bot

After reading 5 chapters, I feel that Angels deserve a better work condition #angellivesmatter Let's take down this shitty god and make a better god be the boss