lazarus898

Wanda is my personal favourite...but won't the age difference become a problem?

what are you even going on about? it has nothing to do with consistency but webnovel's own requirement of 15k words. everyone adds a chapter of gibberish until their other chapters make up 15k words and then delete this gibberish. I myself have a fanfic on this platform of more than 400chps and I didn't have any problem doing it then. it's webnovel's own guidelines that are creating these problems which is why everyone does it but only you are making a big deal out of a temporary thing

It wasn't him using his power at the beach that triggered the alert for SHIELD but him opening his eyes as Jared Parker when he first came to this world. if SHIELD gets an alert everytime the mc uses his powers then that would be really bad

The direction his powers will be proceeding might eventually lead him to bloodbending but I don't want him to rush into that since it would be too overpowered. I want the mc to be a good balance between powers and how to utilize the people he gathers along his journey

Yes but I am not sure if I should use someone who is a known MCU character as his love interest. If you have any suggestions then even better.

I am trying to find a good balance between waterbending which would allow me to progress his powers to other kinds of bending related to water like in the Avatar: the last bender and also the powers of Percy Jackson where whether can also play a big part in making him strong. I don't want to put in all together since it would make him extremely overpowered in a short time which I don't think readers like a lot.

Yes actually I had big plans for this fanfiction but just within the first 30 chps readers pointed out many things they didn't like so i decided to keep the outer frame and concept of the fanfic the same while rewriting everything else.

Yea had to...made many changes since the last one had a lot of mistakes which people pointed out

As the author of this fanfiction, I try to give my readers the best content but as a novice writer I would appreciate it if you could read my content and let me know what I am doing right and where I am lacking. Hope you guys like what you read.[img=recommend]

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