Mathew_Hibbard

i hope you can actually pull off a movie or 2

i agree i was confused as well for half a second

that dam laughing god and Cain causing mischief!!!!

Karl does remind me of Cain

the mention of the name "darklight host" got my attention, that's when i saw the author's name.

you mean the power of faith?

I am sorry but I am pretty sure that splitting up your chapters like this is hard on all of your readers it is easier for us to read it all once not to mention we don't have to stop twice to read it or read it in the middle of doing something when it's all together we can just read it once when we have a moment so I would suggest just making it one time one time only and do both chapters

soon?

this chapter is the same as the third Prince exactly the same and I can't continue reading the story without fooling understanding what is going on so if you would like to fix this chapter please do if not there's a thousand or a million of us that won't read it anymore

so you're not just the king of cliffhangers but also your comedy Central today?