The novel has an impressive plot, with huge room to have the characters roam, but the pilot chapter seemed to lack emotion. It had great detail and amazing descriptions, but when it came to providing emotions or human body language, it didn't seem the best. I hope that it improves as it goes along, but I'm optimistic of its future :)

He's no longer a stickman!

Thank for the review, but for most people, they found it pretty easy to read. It may just be personal preference or something similar that's preventing you from getting into the flow, and that's completely natural. I hope you have a good 2023 :)

Thank you so much for this awesome review!

Quite impressive literature skills from the author, which honestly astonished me when they told me that they had only started writing since the New Year. Genuinely interested in how the story progresses with it's incredible use of metaphors and hidden symbolism.

This is quite a good novel with a great plot that can be expanded upon further once more time is put into it! I would suggest getting an editor to look over your work and correct a few spelling mistakes, just to make it so anyone can sit down and read this without trying to decipher what's being said :)

Thank you very much! I really hope you keep enjoying the novel as it progresses!

Popping* might wanna correct this one in particular

I can absolutely do that! Thank you very much for showing me what can be improved, as I'd love to make this the best novel I've ever written :)

Thank you very much :)

The novel has an impressive plot, with huge room to have the characters roam, but the pilot chapter seemed to lack emotion. It had great detail and amazing descriptions, but when it came to providing emotions or human body language, it didn't seem the best. I hope that it improves as it goes along, but I'm optimistic of its future :)

No problemo

The writing quality could use a bit of work, but it has a great concept behind it. With a bit of editing, it could get 5 stars, easily. It has good characters and a nice plot, so I'm hoping to see more of this :)

This book has quite a good premise, with impressive execution of the story. The author paces it well enough so that it doesn't drag on, but nothing feels too rushed. If you're interested in fantasy/system novels, I would highly recommend giving this one a shot :)

Thank you! I really pride myself in the sheer advancements made between this novel and Skelengel. It's much more balanced with a more fleshed out plot :)

I mean, I've seen people reference the left side as the left hand, so I personally believe it fits lol

They will.

That is true, it's quite a bad thing to do. He's revealing information about himself. You'll see where revealing this information gets him later. One word of advice though. If you want to read a genuinely good story, read The System Of Silence. I'm writing it as of right now and it's turning out so much better than this novel.

I don't think I ever specified, but later on it's revealed that he's a second-year student in his school, which means that he's 14 years old :)

More is coming, don't worry :)