FalseHope99

so it's a chinese translated fanfic ?

right on buddy

tanya was purely professional most of the time though, this is sadistic :)))

shinomiya ???

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good points: comprehensible writing, while it's not anything high-quality and pleasant to read, it's still better than most other fanfics. bad points: the depth of each character is shallow to say the least. sometimes, the MC would just act in a way that has no relation to the plot whatsoever. in other words, everything feels like it's just randomly mashed up together depending on the author's mood and plot convenience. this is based in the MCU universe with some mutants in it, and I guess the author was planning to link it up to make it interesting later on, but the writing style was so repetitive in so many parts that I just got bored and gave up reading after 35 chapters or so. it is a fanfic so he can do whatever the hell he wants I suppose, that's why it seems so hypocritical and rushed in some phase of the story. I don't recommend it if you're looking for some hidden gem, but give it a read just to kill time.

I can feel a bunch of readers dropping from this somewhat brain dead conversation, but I'll stick around for a bit

you fookin simp

even a computer has to have a cooling system ya know

feels like ntr for some reason