Writing Quality: 4/5 Stability of Updates: 3/5 Story Development: 4/5 Character Design: 3/5 World Background: 3/5 === I'll be giving my general thoughts as a reader. First and foremost, I love this novel. It's the type of novel I've been wanting to read the most. The story itself is well written with structured sentences and no spelling mistakes. While update stability has been lacking of late, It's tolerable. While the story can be generic, I find it charming in a weird way. Anyways, I'm not a reviewer nor a critic, so I am not able to give constructive criticism. And I do not think it is my place to do so as this is after all your story. But what I can say is that I do like the story. <3

Agreed. There is a difference between being kind and thoughtless.

There are already hundreds of Harem novels and it makes it hard to concentrate on a singular relationship. At that point, the word 'love' becomes diluted and it makes any relationship in the novel boring. I dont want this novel to fall for the same fate.

+1

As mentioned in the first chapter, I didn't feel comfortable making a novel where the main character changes gender in the middle of the novel. It felt like I had to write something about gender dysphoria and... I think that's better left to someone more educated than me.

Yup :)

thank you very much

thank you

Yup! Thank you very much

+1

Best I can do is over 2

instead of threw, it should be through :)

I feel called out

Not a tad, its way fucking bigger

calling a particular sexual preference normal is kinda rude. of course ik that not what you meant by it, but im just saying

worse, a fanfic

people who never leave the house

It's good to have context on what is happening. Getting suddenly rewarded with special powers by no one wouldn't make sense. Yes, its good for some stories but probably not this one

You wrote the story and made us feel pain.

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