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XXXXC2yrตอบกลับถึง TheFailedOne- XXXXC2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 1 GOOD GIRL.
- XXXXC2yrแปะแล้ว
I read the synopsis and thought, 'Interesting,' and I started reading with high expectation. (and tbh, I shouldn't have done that considering the quality on webnovel.) But unexpectedly or not, this novel is wonderful. Writing quality is great. It is funny, and I had a crazy ride reading this. Though as not many chaps are published, I cannot give constructive feedback, but, I wholeheartedly support the author. Overall, if you want a quality read, then you should read this book. Highly recommended.
- XXXXC2yrตอบกลับถึง ChubbyLiv
I was just checking if wn shadowbanned the picture. These idiots usually do it.
ตอนนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - XXXXC2yrตอบกลับถึง Sake_Vision
no they won't. And any other comment. : )
ตอนนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - XXXXC2yrแปะแล้ว
I read the synopsis and thought, 'Interesting,' and I started reading with high expectation. (and tbh, I shouldn't have done that considering the quality on webnovel.) But unexpectedly or not, this novel is wonderful. Writing quality is great. It is funny, and I had a crazy ride reading this. Though as not many chaps are published, I cannot give constructive feedback, but, I wholeheartedly support the author. Overall, if you want a quality read, then you should read this book. Highly recommended.
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - XXXXC2yrตอบกลับถึง HelenBold
this was my intention. :)
ตอนนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - XXXXC2yrตอบกลับถึง Alpha_Venerable
full lips is basically evenly and naturally plump on both top and bottom. :)
ตอนนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - XXXXC2yrตอบกลับถึง Alpha_Venerable
well, if you are going to continue reading (whenever I'll post it) then you are in for a surprise. :)
ตอนนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - XXXXC2yrตอบกลับถึง Alpha_Venerable
read it carefully. Aren't hints given? or is it that confusing?
ตอนนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - XXXXC2yrตอบกลับถึง Alpha_Venerable
a few paras above, it's stated that okita is mc's friend.
ตอนนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - XXXXC2yrตอบกลับถึง WhiteVest
yep
Waves of young and old pretty soon filled the plaza, waiting for the spokesperson to walk outside. The creaking wooden doors opened and two rows of guards walked outside with their impenetrable silver-plated armor on display. - XXXXC2yrตอบกลับถึง WhiteVest
the problem is that it is JUST 2 chapters. I won't be surprsied if by the end of 100 chaps,there will be 500 characters.
Saxon was now the one confused. "Alexi not only surpassed you but passed all 100 assessments while you are still at assessment 86. Aren't you worried about the message that sends to the world? It means you are inferior to him. He might even challenge your position." Saxon was agitated. No one seemed to understand the situation. He was just talking to Verra about how they could handle the situation when Xasha walked in. - XXXXC2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
missing commas here. And as I am reading this second time, I am not that confused. For first time readers, they might not be able to follow up.
Saxon's face lit up, "I missed you too hu- hey what are you-" while he was distracted Xara had already snatched the document from his hand and was inspecting it after locking the panicking Saxon in a box made of compressed mana. - XXXXC2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
capitalize M in miss here.
Choir turned around to look at her. He was annoyed, but seeing who was shouting at him, he understood immediately. He addressed her directly, "miss Von Creig, are you saying that you would have been fine achieving the bare minimum to pass? Is that the attitude to be had by the daughter of our City Lord and patriarch?" - XXXXC2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
u still haven't described characters' appearance smh. Just decribe their eye color and all a bit. (not too heavy description ofc.)
"What are you thinking about?" asked Xeik, as he admired the cherry hair of Blossom flowing with the wind as she stared out at the open sky absentmindedly. - XXXXC2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
describe it better bruh.
Her actions brought a flutter to Xeik's heart and a smirk to his face. He held her close and their lips met, their lips parted and Xeik stepped back in bliss. "We have a long way to go. We haven't even qualified to join a raid team yet. But with you by my side and me by yours, I know we can reach the other end of this continent together," Xeik professed.