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a terrible read. the mc went through sh** and is too dumb and pathetic to get a personality development. he got betrayed by his friends, allies and his wife. and what does he do? A whole bunch of nothing. he acts like the same wimpy pathetic moron as he did before he got betrayed. he apologises for everything all the time for no reason. he even apologises for things he has no control over like a pathetic wimp. he keeps shouting nonsense about making friends and stuff even though he literally just got betrayed by everyone he trusted. no intelligence with this mc whatsoever.
I DO think the story is worth it, and the synopsis of the novel sounded interesting, but all these infodumps are becoming too confusing to the point where I feel that if I keep reading I won't be able to understand the story itself since I couldn't be bothered to read the info dumps.
chapter after chapter of infodumps, this is stupid. to entice readers to keep reading you need to first show the promise of a good story, bombarding your readers with infodump after infodump before the story even gets a chance to start was a dumb move. I would suggest rewriting the early chapters. at this point, I'm skipping through paragraph after paragraph and I don't even feel like I'm missing something relevant.
I read until chapter 10, and thats when I had to drop. it's clear that this novel follows the trope of an MC who's reborn as a baby. that in itself wouldn't be an issue if there had been a couple of chapters of him being a baby before getting a timeskip until he's a teen or something. but no, this is the story of a grown man being reborn as a baby and has to pretend to be a clueless and stupid kid just so the people around him doesn't suspect him. it's an overused trope that's so utterly boring that watching paint dry would be more entertaining.