I'm reading this and just keep thinking she is a zerg of some sort.

ok thanks for making that clear then I will go back and reread your story then sorry for assuming it was copy and paste

I don't know I stopped reading after I found it posted online so i wanted to know if you would continue where they left off or if this story would end just like the other one I found usually if you see a copy of a fanfiction on here they just copy and paste it

are you going to continue the story after the point where the last author stopped or is this just a copy and paste situation

I keep forgetting about that but I would still only add maybe one or two people and that would be Rouge and Wanda but I like Luna because of how innocent she is what's wrong with that. and yes I know Rogue and Wanda are overused to but so what.

i say just keep Luna and Wednesday as the only love interests. I feel like Wednesday would come to like Luna. Probably not at first but I think they could definitely become best friends.

MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!!

I noticed that this is either heavily inspired by another author or just a cheap imitation. Naruto: Systematic Shinobi is basically the same thing and a lot of the wording is the same with just a few differences. Yes somethings are different like he didn't get the summoning scroll from the mansion in the land of rivers or whatever it is but again it is still following basically the same outline just the mc has a different personality.

please write this one most heaven's library fanfics I find make the mc way to overpowered way to fast

Great story! Great Idea! Great writing! This story is great and is absolutely full of potential. I just can't wait for more chapters to read and hope you don't drop it like it seems you did with some of your other stories.

you should definitely keep this fanfic and when you finish with teen wolf you can make an amazing tvd fanfic

kanima hellhound and something that can fly

The raw is called The Day of the Draw at Hogwarts there are 144 chapters link: . . . . . . . . . . https://m.qidian.com/book/1029346926.html

where can I find this in english

+1

lightning and water make acid release and water and wind make ice release so I was thinking something like an acidic ice or something and if he ends up with storm release to then he could make an acidic rainstorm that freezes everything it touches or something

Honestly you are doing pretty good for your first story. I have tried writing stories for some of the ideas I have but I suck at writing and always give up. Since you are using a translator I would recommend finding a better one than Google translate or have someone that is fluent in English read the chapter before you post it to make sure it makes sense.

I think the story has a lot of potential. But it is currently written like you are translating it from another language. A very bad translation at that. But like I said the story has some good ideas and could go far if it was written correctly and wasn't so painful to read.

nice story so far

where is the chapter? all i see is coming soon.