Linda_Ngan

Love the storyline .... but 😖😖😖 dear writer ... are you writing when you’re half awake , because you seem not to be able to differentiate your characters properly and kept mixing up their rightful name and especially cannot differentiate between he or she ..... as a writer those are the most basic of writing a story , its started off so well ,such a pity to a great storyline 😢😢😢

Can the writer please make up their mind on the characters name .... Si Huang or Si Rong, it’s so very confusing 😖😖😖

Either the writer or the translator is so mentally out of zone or high on something ,because they kept mixing up the characters names wrong, not in one chapters but most of the chapters 🥴🥴🥴

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

I wish the writer would spend less time descripting so much on the foods.... seriously ... some time as much as 1 1/2 to 2 full pages taking away pages for the story and it get kind of annoying when it happened every time Hera is eating ..... we the reader is not interested in minuscule details of her everything she eats, we paying to read the story, please understand our frustration as it’s too costly for your readers to pay for each chapters as it’s .

I like the storyline of this book but I think the writer made a mistake using American name on the characters as they made no sense as everything point to chinese historical themes and it get confusing and kind of weird and don’t make sense in some way. 🥴🥴🥴

I’m so totally into this book ,kept me totally interested in all 40 chapters and I want to read the next chapters so badly .....so please ... please ...update soon 🤞🤞🤞🤞

The president has so many name that l’m going crazy....Moira...Mary M....and quite a few other,is the writer high when he or she is writing .Can’t you have some respect for your work and some respect to us reader who pays to read your chapters 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

Dear writer .... can you make up your mind, are you going for all english characters name or asian Chinese characters name ,because their name kept changing back and forth and it’s driving me as a reader crazy....this book characters names are all jumbled up constantly 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

Is it the writer problems or the Translator problems but in the end it’s mainly that no one bother to proofread the works. WHY !!!, because whoever it is..... they kept mixing up the characters name and it’s confusing as sh** 🥴🥴🥴🥴