Darin4

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go for it, just need daily updates lol!

You need to add (?) when questions are asked and (!) if surprised or shouting. Also, don't forget (,). Another thing, just use common words so readers won't have to use Google or anything just to know their meanings.

some have.

please make Tsunade a virgin author. She's a virgin in the original ,right? an old virgin lol but it's up to you, just a suggestion.

the romance is LIT!

knowing will's gf will most likely have a role that will require to kiss someone that is not will, Imma go. I believe that when you're in love with someone, no matter what, you cannot have an intimate moments with another man. that's how I was taught by my parents. sorry, I know some people are open with it but I'm not so I guess goodluck! also, don't comment on this to try and argue with me because we all know we all have different opinions from each other.

harness culti

is this dropped?