I love the story so far and dont want to see you struggle then drop it.

Oh its fine. Just wanted to warn you before you grew the harem to large. Ive seen tons of stories get dropped by their writers because of how large the harems got.

for the sake of the story no. harems that get to large start to damage the story. the romance becomes rushed. and it takes to much focus on the girls then the story

Honestly neither. If i had to pick one go with an ancient flag or something that symbolizes humanity’s indomitable will to adapt and survive

great work my only issue is that its incredibly difficult to tell what is; speech, thoughts and internal speech. maybe use "speech" *thoughts* and something else for the thought communication? it would help massively in separating these

he needs to be in it would be hilarious

should join in future

More please

i cant wait to see the outcome when his friends arrive

Great chapters

uhh so its been a few hours yet its still equal on patreon at least for traveler tier

I guess 2 tomorrow? They might have more editing and length

Umm i thought the patreon would be 10 chapters ahead? They seem to be equal

More please

This is stolen work the og is on ffn

WELCOME BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

whats with the weird symbols?

with haki the huga eyes are rather useless

i feel this to my very bones. especially with halo fan fics

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