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occasional sex scenes may still be understandable. But... almost all chapters up to 134 chapters contain perverted things, making me bored.... Naruto here looks 16 years old, but mentally... damn, that's a 12 year old mentality. that's terrible! and I don't think this is the best Naruto FF novel, but it's not the worst either... I just hope there's less sex scenes in each chapter.

I know Naruto is a 12 year old kid- or more. But, his "innocent" words really make me cringe...

it feels like reading a chatgpt, a bit stiff and sometimes there are some who get mixed up (character names). also, i kinda don't like the female dominated MC, he's clearly a masochist... it's disgusting to me.

Man, this is so funny

My Friend, you don't understand it?? okay, okay. no problem. Actually, this is my criticism and complaint, especially the author who chose the main character, whose nature is similar to Cid who is not different at all.

I agree, the way the MC talks to other characters is too simple and the timeline is too fast and not too detailed, making me who read this novel bored to death.

Bakugou... in terms of quirk power, he's actually quite strong and effective. It's just that he can't control his emotions and often screams, which I find quite annoying.

I've read the original version in Brazilian Portuguese (I translated it into my mother tongue), and I'm still confused about the power of Apocalypse. In fact, it only appeared once, I didn't see it again after finishing it.

you know, i hate MC who is passive from politics. joining the dragon dance is actually a Cannon event, MC can't avoid this, moreover he is a Targaryen and Valyrian. if you don't make MC join, then it's just a waste.