Dao_of_the_Alpha
An avid reader who wishes to become a writer.
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A good story, interesting plot. Some of the earlier chapters do need to be reexamined by an editor. It would be a good idea to slow down on the number of worlds that you crossover in the fic. Otherwise, keep up the good work.