Note I feel that it will be deleted from the author

write 3 good i think? Downloading 4 chapters, one per day, very good, the development of the story is not really great, 80 chapters, I did not see anything new, only an additional character doing some things and taking the role of Goku. I was expecting something better, especially the Planet Namek event. I did not feel that it was exciting. You could have made it better. Character design 2 Reason ? Because it is one character, there is really nothing else, and it is somewhat naive. I love evil characters and plots. The background of World 3 is nothing new. There was some explanation, but it still did not leave your own touch, and this is a pity.

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This is what I wanted to say, well done

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I want a site to complete reading, I did not find it 😭

I need more I need more I need more I need more I need more I need more I need more I need more I need more I need more I need more I need more I need more I need more I need more I need more I need more I need more

I am talking about Misaka

It was good, but the author spoiled it. I am reading a story to have fun, I don’t want. I read about the two triangles. It's disgusting. You can keep it. I don’t want it.

One of the four or five stars of Roya is a psychopath 😠 ———————________________________———————_________________________———————_________________________———————___________—————-____—————______———______————-__—

I read it, but did not understand anything about the story

Why is he so stupid, so much stupid in this narration Why is he so stupid, so much stupid in this narration Why is he so stupid, so much stupid in this narration Why is he so stupid, so much stupid in this narration

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If I develop and write a better novel, I will be happy with its readers