Swatdude64
Avid reader and writer for shits and giggles
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Just binge reading, this is good stuff author. As for interludes, yeah they're entertaining stuff and allow you to slide in smaller reactions that would sidetrack the story with a full scene. And if you're the kind of author that gets stunted on specific story progressions, taking the time to backtrack to an interlude can help you think that through in the meantime.
You're absolutely cooking so far but just a warning, it's heavily implied Cleave is NOT a ranged attack by default. He only ever calls the ranged slashes dismantle, and his strongest attacks are when he has direct contact which likely means those are cleave. It's likely only ranged when in Malevolent Shrine. However I guess that could either be from using the sure hit as a medium OR a binding vow of "Cleave requires contact outside of MS" in order to strengthen it, like he did with Furnace.
It's like the drunken rambling of a crack addict, sentences and story are all over the place for the entire first half and there's a lot of random fourth wall breaks and other crazy bullshit. BUT it's good. It's dumb bullshit but it's fun dumb bullshit that 90% of the time doesn't take itself too seriously. Like Nah I'd Adapt but with the sanity of its commentors. Okay that one was too mean. But anyways it won't teach you the meaning of life but it'll entertain you and give you chuckles and that's more than enough for literally free
Very unique ideas, God awful character writing, on all accounts. MC has a drop down tab he literally never checks that could solve every issue, and that's just the cherry on top for how dumb they made the MC. Typical Chinese translation problems, Luffy talks like he's a young master. Overall, could have been good but it's not worth the time