ArkAnghel

The entire Empire is currently in dissaray a small revolution is brewing near and commanders that are loyal to the previous emperor.

Thanks for the review

I rate my novel low because I know for myself I need a lot of improvements regarding the structure of the sentences. But like that being said I want you guys to support it thanks a lot!

What can I expect from one of the most awsome writers I know. Keep up I want more chapters its thrilling at the same time I can learn new words in this novel.

thanks for pointing those errors

I like how you comment on every chapter I have

Have you ever ride a rollercoaster where it starts slow at the beginning then it started to speed up? in this book you are accelerated immediately. The story threw you directly in there. There are still minor errors but those things are easily fixable nice job You got hooked by the story and I am pretty sure you will stay reading it. I know, because it happens to me. I am a picky reader. I usually have to reread early chapters a few times before I start binge-reading it.

you can cut this to many sentences to avoid block of words. but the creation of sentences is good.

Have you ever ride a rollercoaster where it starts slow at the beginning then it started to speed up? Well, in this book you are accelerated immediately. The story threw you directly in there. You are hooked by the story and I am pretty sure you will stay reading it. I know, because it happens to me. I am a picky reader. I usually have to reread early chapters a few times before I start binge-reading it.

tell me if you reached the end of the chapter and then I release the last batch of chapter stocks