KikiLovesRainbows
I love romance and I'm an aspiring author! I'm still young so my writing still needs work, but I hope you reed my novels and watch me steadily improve! I hope you enjoy my novels <3
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it isn't bad but I feel like descriptions are really lacking and the writing itself is very lacklustre. Also why do I need to know that his boots were made of steel? I think it's a nice try but it does need improvement. The story idea isn't bad but its just the writing itself that I find a bit awkward. I'm sure you will do better next time good luck!