Falamorx

This is from the Flash TV show, right?

The boys

He has the necromancer class right? So maybe go a bit more in depth with the class. Could go along the solo leveling route in terms of skills, or perhaps a passive skill that works well with sage chakra, probably could be an evolvable skill that becomes stronger with him even at above super kage levels

F in the chat

I am confused, I thought that the tailed beasts were immortal?

Gunpowder?

Interesting start with different pokemon than what most fanfics would use. The pokemon increase in strength fast but that is probably not the focus of the fanfic( I am not sure), the route looks like the op hidden type which I haven't seen in pokemon fanfics before. So I am really excited for this and hope the author is of the same mind too and doesn't drop.

Ooof glad that isn't me then

Natsu and gray - fairy tail

Grammar is a bit hard to understand but I like the story so far