vorlefan
Check out my first novel, Traveler's Will: Chronicles of the Lost Worlds: https://www.webnovel.com/book/traveller's-will_25553012106498105
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This novel is new and for that, my review is more a incentive than criticism about the story itself. It has points it needs a few touch to improve, like the writing quality, but it has potential. I like the scenario that resembles a mix of steampunk and that movie Wall-E. Going to return later for a better review. Give it a try, you may like it.
If you enjoy novel like Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, then you definitely going to like this one, since the author itself is a fan of ORV, and the novel contains references for the novel and other novels too. The only thing I hope the author could improve in the next chapters and even edit the previous one, is the writing quality, since it has some grammar errors. With best regards, vorlefan.
My man is a fellow one xD