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I am glad that you make mc's team have multiple pokemons with same type. This is my preference but I quite enjoy reading a monotype pokemon fanfic, although it is rare.
It is good that you stop giving the mc more shiny. Any more than that and it will lose meaning . The thing I like thr most in this story is the bond between mc and his pokemon( axew for now). So after getting his fourth ( growlithe and egg?), I hope you can slow down a bit and focus on bonding.
That doesn't make sense, I don't see kumo giving up just because of this when they can get more profit. Are they going to demand other people? Because if I am raikage , I can just refute konoha saying that the criminal got away. Raikage can just say no 8 years old genin beating my jonin even if he knows the truth. He can just says konoha is making a 8 year old scapegoat because they don't wanna give a real criminal which is a hyuga.
how old is he? I forgot.
nice chap
or maybe he should revive five saiyan kids using normal dragon ball and raise them. Isn't that more efficient?
There is something i can't understand? Why is he trying to gather super dragon ball just to get to universe 6? The only thing u6 has to offer is pure saiyans . He don't need them to become ssj god if he has super dragon ball. Can't he just makes a wish?
good chap
Well, that is also true i guess. But from what i see, he is creating them as tools for his conquest so "love" is kind of a wrong word right here.
Thanks.