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  • Emilly_ya day ago
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    I dropped the novel at chapter 116 because of Meng Zhu. A boring and childish figure, she looks like a 5 year old child who is going to be forced with Fang Yao's brother who is over 10 years old and a very mature personality for his age. Honestly, how did the author manage to kill the work by forcing this second couple like that? This could be the main reason for dropping the work but there are also many errors by the author and this in just 100 chapters, such as the time they will have to continue in high school, should be more than two years for the fl but in the last chapters it seems like there was a time jump.

  • Emilly_y5 days ago
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    the novel is good but ends abruptly in chapter 320. In chapter 319 the plot is still developing and explaining ml's past but halfway through 320 it seems that the author gives up and writes something just to conclude the novel.

  • Emilly_y13 days ago
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    I stopped at chapter 108, if you want to read this I recommend that you don't use your brain while reading it otherwise you might feel real pain when reading this, it's so bad. There are many other books with an almost identical story and with 1000x better writing.

  • Emilly_y16 days ago
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    I stopped at chapter 57, all the characters are boring and silly, apart from ml and fl. It's okay to have a good guy personality but to the point of ignoring everything it makes reading annoying.

  • Emilly_y22 days ago
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    the first 800 chapters are a bad slice of life, after that it improves until chapter 1200, the novel becomes interesting and the plot starts to evolve and take shape but when it gets past chapter 1200 it seems that the author becomes a 3 year old child, the novel is worse than the first 800 chapters, there is no logic, you keep asking yourself what is happening and you get irritated when reading so I dropped it at chapter 1257, Maybe I'll come back someday to continue when I'm feeling negative IQ.

  • Emilly_ya month ago
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    I stopped reading at chapter 457, the novel should be called "after her divorce, I carry everyone to the coast", only fl is an interesting character, you ask me what about ml? the ml is just there to be a dead weight for the fl, it doesn't help with almost anything and it hinders the fl, I think that after chapter 300 or so it starts to have a lot of holes in the plot, the worst thing was that the enemies of the protagonists learned how to make gunpowder without even the protagonist herself having made it and telling others the recipe, this was the biggest reason for giving up reading this.

  • Emilly_ya month ago
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    The novel is good until the final 20 chapters, if you are going to read it consider that the last 20 chapters are practically a new plot. These 20 chapters are horrible, full of holes in the plot and with too many patches to make the plot work. It was a rushed ending and I think the author got lost in the middle of the story because of the system, you realize that after the war it seems like the system is very op which breaks the rhythm of the novel, finally I think it is a novel with a light story to read if you don't get irritated by the amount of errors that will appear when the final 20 chapters are read. ps. I was irritated for a couple of days just because of the plot holes in this ending hahahaha ps2. The kingdom building tag is just decoration to attract the attention of people who like the theme.

  • Emilly_y2 months ago
    Replied to Lonelytree

    The one we see is the biggest lie in the world "The pace of this book is faster."

  • Emilly_y2 months ago
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    the author said "The pace of this book is faster", volume 1 of the book had about 650 horrible chapters where almost everything was nonsense, the story progresses 6 months in more than 600 chapters but the passage of time is all confusing and not It makes sense, it was the worst character design I've ever seen among the hundreds of books I've read. Volume 2 starts and I think maybe it will get better but a month passes in the book, winter isn't over yet hahahaha fl creates super soldiers in 1 month, fl says there are still 2 months left before winter ends, I say this should be the longest winter the human race has ever seen and that's because the author said "The pace of this book is faster" hahahaha I'm not even going to comment on how the carriages look like fast travel in some RPGs. To finish the fl and the ml... I'm just going to say this about the ml he feels romantic emotions for a girl who looks 8 years old and the author's implicit excuses for this are disgusting, the fl is confusing, she said I'm going to get revenge on everyone that hurt me but lets a lot of things pass and at other times destroys families for almost nothing in comparison, not to mention that she accepts some people as family after 2 or 3 dates hahahaha also many ideals of the century 21 are used to judge thoughts from 2000 thousand years ago, I think that fl had to have a good sense to reflect that the world she is currently in is 2000 thousand years in the past so she wants women to fight against men at that time when they had Brainwashing for decades that their men are gods to them is idiotic to say the least. I stopped at chapter 746 and I can't force myself to continue reading after seeing how ml's personality is in this chapter and seeing that a secondary recognizes ml's real face when only the people closest to ml have seen his face.

  • Emilly_y2 months ago
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    The novel was wonderful, the best I read in the year 2024, but after it entered the capital of Zhou, it seemed like the author changed, the story became a let's solve the mystery? It got boring and I read another 300 or 400 chapters of this just to see if the quality would return to what it was at the beginning, but unfortunately it didn't. I stopped at chapter 631 and there was nothing about agriculture and the quality of the plot decreased even more after chapter 600.