XenonNoble
Not much to know about me really, basically a waste of time for you to be reading this. Seriously, there's nothing here. Don't you have something to read now? You should probably go and do that then.
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XenonNoble13hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วYou did well. I think the crying on the marriage rejection was a little far. But on the verge of tears and confused would definately fit.
This was again far too stressful to write about the feelings of a young Cersei. No more of this, thank you very much.- XenonNoble15hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
That name is weak. Would’ve been cooler if he was quite.
"[Mercury Silver Spears]" He declared with a calm, resonant voice. In an instant, the silver spears shot forward with blinding speed. The operatives barely had time to react. The spears found their marks, piercing through their defenses and incapacitating them before they could make any significant distance. Cries of pain and surprise echoed through the forest as they fell, the spears pinning their bodies to the ground or nearby trees, and destroyed the terrain. - XenonNoble15hตอบกลับถึง Dragon_Rage93
With Jiraiya, he still sent back reports (he’s Konoha’s spymaster). As for Tsunade, she didn’t really hide, more just stayed away and Konoha ignored her depressive state, plus she is a notorious gambler (“the sucker”). Orochimaru, he is in contact with Danzo.
"The last piece of concrete information we received," Hiruzen continued, "was that he went to the Land of Wind. After that, he vanished without a trace. He's been operating in complete secrecy, and we have no idea what he's been up to. This uncertainty makes him even more dangerous." - XenonNoble1dตอบกลับถึง Shadowslayers
Or Robert when he becomes King
A/N Yes, I created this myself. Honestly, I'm quite proud of this one. I never know what words to use when I want to rhyme but this time it worked. No AI was used for this. I am giddy to see what everyone says when Maggy's words will finally make sense. - XenonNoble3dตอบกลับถึง XenonNoble
I typed wyvern - autocorrect
"Heh, that weak bast*rd had no talent when he was kicked out of the family, there's no way he would have grown much in these few years… don't worry much he is too weak to even fight you…" - XenonNoble3dตอบกลับถึง Above_You
This their first year. Also a family that kicked out a failure and looks down on him wouldn’t see it as a problem. Also in the game according to MC after the why’ve r attack (day 1) he was fired.
"Heh, that weak bast*rd had no talent when he was kicked out of the family, there's no way he would have grown much in these few years… don't worry much he is too weak to even fight you…" - XenonNoble6dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Honestly, I was entertained. Brought some change to a cliche ROB introduction and made it a little fresh. Nice work.
{End of the cringe} - XenonNoble6dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Haha, I love Sgt Johnson
As one of the Drop ships neared its drop point it was receiving turbulence from the ongoing air battle between the UNSC fighters and Covenant banshees. - XenonNoble6dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วAdmiral Ross had pinned the 5-star Admiral rank onto Axel's uniform. This was a big moment for Axel as not only had he reached the top in terms of position, but he also now outranks everybody in rank besides the other Fleet Admirals. But his position as Chairman held more power than a Fleet Admiral as he now oversaw the entirety of the UNSC.
- XenonNoble7dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Yes! Ok, good, pumping the brakes a little is good.
Giotto sighed as he answered. [A/N: JP protag? Nah, just adding some limits to the character. I don't want to turn this into a full blown hentai. Need some relationship building, if you know what I mean. Also, I just wanted to put Emma in the lead... yeah, think about what I just said and you'll understand] - XenonNoble7dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วShe spoke in a seductive tone as she rubbed her ass on Giotto's dick.
- XenonNoble7dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Aww, no shonen shenanigans of converting an enemy to a loyal friend? Would’ve been funny. Also Wisk is a public figure.
*I guess killing him and using his influence and manpower is the only way…* - XenonNoble7dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Aww, was hoping he would be more mafia related missions (like shonen mafia type stuff)
Prepare the world for Superheroes! Make a name for yourself! Before Iron Man becomes the talk of the town, become the first hero of the world!] - XenonNoble7dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Probably not a good idea to suddenly lose an hour of sleep when you are adding more “work” to your timetable. Maybe after you get used to using free hours for writing without negatively affecting you.
I plan to focus on writing and releasing several chapters of SuperSoldier continuously on Patreon! I hope to get at least 5 chapters out, but it could be many more, I want to see how far I can go if I focus on writing like crazy (I still have a job so essentially I will use all my free hours for this, maybe I will even sleep an hour less or something like that) the week starts on Sunday June 2 and will end until next Sunday, after that, depending on how it goes, maybe I'll do a Still Defiant week. - XenonNoble8dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Bro, is he gonna get reminded at every single obstacle? Like, I wanna cheer for him, but his actions and attitude are getting very hard to like as a reader.
I looked back at Victoria once more, but this time, my determined expression was back. "Yeah, Boss. I did say that. Thanks for reminding me." I thanked her while giving her the same thumbs up that I had given her just before. She stared at my determined expression for a moment, then broke into a giggle. - XenonNoble8dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วหนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว
- XenonNoble8dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วหนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว
- XenonNoble8dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วYou'll pay for this.
- XenonNoble8dตอบกลับถึง Bad_Wolf_7811
Hmm, maybe you could add a sentence where MC comments about her make up (you know like an offhand comment that pokes at her effort in hiding age) then pitch the idea that unless her agency could replicate “his” cosmetic pills (or “rejuvenation pills) then he would be a better option. At least this way it’s slightly more logical. A famous woman worried about appearance would have self esteem/consciousness about how fake they look with make up if they were a natural beauty before aging.
Wei Jun pretended to take something out of his pocket while in truth, he was pulling it out of his inventory and said, "I will let Miss Li decide that. Use one while you stand in front of the mirror. I will wait for your call." Wei Jun said nothing else and simply left after paying. - XenonNoble9dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Guns are cool
Let me know what you think.