Welp this is where I drop this

Kinda mad I read this part

Can we get at least some spaces between the paragraphs

Started ok got dumber as the story progressed he has rogues power yet never uses it and it’s basically a downgraded sabertooth fan fic

Welp has rogues power ever stopped working also it doesn’t have to be mutant for it to work so when did it become a downgraded saber tooth book from a book about rogue

First thing I thought 😂😂😂

All it takes is an emp to kill him now

Good so for but it’s overwritten like half of the conversations feel like they have way more words than needed just to extend and whenever the mc thinks it way over written like half of the dialogue in this could be cut In half and still get the point across

Don’t give him wood release give him like a aoe healing ability or something

Yall forgot one thing the seals man’s has a different seal for everything

Nice stuff

Both are fine

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