Stick to normal Ig.

It would be more interesting if you put Asafa on Simba's paws instead. This chapter gives the vibe of you replacing Simba's role for your MC. Weakening Simba with such an incident will make Asafa's advantages more prominent for King's position.

Kiba's mom

Or it's Wanted?

Does Keanu Reaves have double identities here? An actor and assassin.

Just a rehashing of the previous chapter but with a different POV, with a bit more detail shown.

Haven't read the original series, so Idk what to expect yet.

Would the further the mission, the higher the world they travel through? Because it is getting more difficult as time goes by, from initial fewer contestants to now numbered 20.

You could have substituted the dialogue with more reasonable words than just absurdly deleting it altogether. Because it is connected to the next dialogue, we as readers get this lost experience while reading, and it's honestly not helping.

So it is Evil/Manipulative!Dumbledore and other cliche-bashing?

Then it's not biologically similar, because tailed beasts are independent entities with separate chakra (being made of chakra), while the shadows are linked directly with the user. I guess the way they work is comparable with how jinchuriki are made of, it's just the shadows akin to keikkei gekkai right? The user is not summoning a beast here, but using their abilities. I do not follow JJK, so I don't know if what I'm assuming is right.

Don't tell me he's going to collect all potential female clan heads to seek security, because I see Kushina, Tsume, and Tsunade (after she loses Nawaki and Dan) are available, age-wise. Then it's NTR.

This reminds me of a Chinese novel, about entertainment, but it also wrote about the dark past of Boston's crunch. However, I don't know if those were real events. Not a serial killer like this, but more evil, and yes toward children or their followers.

Oh yeah, one's strength also affects the mission grade, despite the total number of participants. The rank of the team might also be one of the factors to consider.

Writing comments can't display the spacing hmm..

I thought you were gonna put members' names per arc plus their status (dead or alive)Naruto Alexander (alive)IntroSarah (alive)IntroThe gay soldier (dead)Intro Etc.But I guess it is too much hassle to go back and check all over again. Or you can just add them to your current list, just update the dead ones. That way I can remember their total count before each mission started and estimate the difficulty level.1-7 easy right?7-15 moderate?15-? Hard?

Wrong transition.

Can I have a brief intro for the characters per arc? An auxiliary chapter would be better. So I can check it whenever I forget them.

Eh, he can just name it himself without being asked. This conversation is kind of unnecessary tbh.

Named Arthur means a Westerner at least, but called the God with -san. Kind of does not match your character's setting. And being an ex-soldier? Hopefully, he won't act too childish despite being introverted or suddenly changed from your setting without progression.