CarolinaWuChen

Average 🙂 lots of grammar mistakes and logical issues. Definitely in need of a good editor or proofreader. ........................................

Theres a lot of grammar problems

FINALLY YAY THANK YOU AUTHOR

MEDIOCRE INTERESTING BUT NOT WELL WRITTEN some things arent thorOughly explained author tried to do so much that its poorly executed character design isnt too bad though

Its good

I think the author has really written an excellent novel here. Its a bit depressing when i read the flashbacks but i love the storyline characters and pace of the story so far. Just wish there were more chapters.

We get it its repetitive

We get it shEs traumatized

-NOT GOOD -DIFFICULT TO UNDERSTAND -NOTHING IS THOROUGHLY EXPLAINED -THE WORLD BUILDING IS JUST BAD -U FINISH FEELING CONFUSED MORE THAN HALF the time