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just imagine . mc its a idiot but like all chinese ff, lets make everyone more stupid than the mc to make it seens that the mc is smart i have nothing against chinese ff , sometimes is good, but too much is anoying , if only mc was speaking in chinese way , and everyone else in character its barely ok , but a japanese anime turn in almost cultivator ff ( without the meditation part and cultivating to become immortal ) . if thats not a turn off for you then is a good novel

https://www.webnovel.com/book/harry-potter's-revenge_30318418806989705#review or this is a copy or its original , i dont know who copied from who

https://www.webnovel.com/book/harry-potter-a-tale-of-revenge_27298423905073605 or this is copy or original i dont know who copied from who

i didnt read, i dont know whats its about , i dont know if its my racional brain thinking , but going to give you some question , fist - its harry smart ? ( tittle says witty wizard ) so lets assume that him is smart if he's so smart , why wait until 4º year to start to show he's smart , doenst make sense, " Ok its a fanfiction bla bla bla " but if its so unreal then doesnt apeal to me, my personal opnion of harry potter is - Hate harry potter ( the mc ) the wolrd of harry potter its awesome, like wolrd of high school dxd , like world of game of thrones etc, "ALMOST" every story ( fanfic, novel , movie etc ) has the worst kind of mc ( the stupid ) so i focus on fanfic of harry potter, theres so many awesomes fanfics about harry potter that explores the world of wizards , sry about the rant , that was to you understand why i hate the mc of original , and if you put another idiot as mc , that continue a good world with a crap mc, so the mc of you fanfic its smart , why wait until 4º year , and dont grab the first oportunity in fist year ? ah! and another thing , children abused doesnt turn people with golden heart , not in the kind of psyco , but untrustiful , another kind that harry is in original , so when i see a happy go luck with a fanfic , that triggers me a little , so , again sorry for rant , always see that kind fanfic where harry wait too much time to get up and fight back , and trust everyone . i have to much to rant about harry potter but should stop now ,

its good , until its not , too much crackfic , everything goes right for mc , the whole history is a diary format , even after everything still readable , but after harem start or more like the s3x starded, goes downhill , too muuch drama and girl become stupid whem relationship matters apear

Sotry development its only thing that get 5 stars, its a good story , but let say the errors, too much wrong words , verb to be doenst exist, you , i , he , she , they all over the place , she used for talk about a boy , "i " used in place of you , etc etc character its 0 dont know background of history , why can he kill 2 wizards without remorse, what did he do in his last life .

red alert ... ron and hero same sentence is a big red alert

ALMOST everything was good , but the dialog just sucks , i dont know who is talking or even when someone is talking ... ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,