PrimalFire
Just a book loving jock ottaku! :-)
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Alrighty people this is the customary author review/mini info dump. So this is going to be a very long term project that will be uploaded as often as I can but don't expect too much because I am mostly using this to help me with my writing for my own book. That being said this will be a very interested and unique journey that I hope will bring together all the things we all love from our favorite animes and fanfiction. Also the current order of worlds is not set as of now, but Pokemon is the first universe. And because I know it will get asked about a lot I will say here the MC has 3 wishes but you won't find them all out until chapter 15, anyway I hope you all give my book a try and lmk what y'all think.
Well his first wish was for the Achievement System which is going through some technical upgrades that will make it more unique. The second and third wish I won't say just yet but I can tell you that it will be brought up soon but to reveal it now would be spoilers.
That's the wildest thing you could have possibly said
Oh my fricking goodness this is one of the coldest lines to date ☠️😈😈
Thanks for the chapter, the one thing I don't understand is why doesn't my boy Han just chill out until he gets another kid or two from his current lovers who have had their talent increased all this time. That way he continues having talented descendants and increasing the numbers without taking in a bunch of women every other chapter. Not that I hate that but it's hard to still care about the original concubines when there's almost 100 of them and it makes it seem like only the wives are actual characters. Also I understand Han Li doesn't want his women to only be breeding cattle but a couple kids every decade should be fine for him imo. Sorry for the random rant but these thoughts have been bouncing in my head, anyways thanks again for the chapter can't wait for the time when MC can reveal True Martial realm strength 💪🏾
thanks for the chapter and I vote for combat power with maybe the comparison in brackets next to it like Combat Power: Peak 2nd Evolution (Town Level) something like that I think would be cool and keep it easy to understand his progress in evolutions and strength. Anyway keep up the good work I'm loving where this is going so far.
Systems*
alright guys and gals I am not going to give you all a long speech but I must ask... am I the only one that still thinks Leo's mom is going to be even more cruel than him when we finally see here really taking action again? Also is it bad that I was grinning maniacally the whole time I was reading? These are just a couple thoughts in my head but I really can't wait to see all those people's heads roll for pushing Leo this far
Feral*
my mind is blown but this is exactly the type of surprises i love to see
While I don't actually mind it or anything, I do think it's a bit sad that most people like Bai who have given their lives to Lin Yuan will never be in his inner circle even though he literally controls their lives and death already💀🤷🏾♂️. Just a thought, but like come on, even though I get it for people like the Goddess of Mercy who are decently strong and have been alive for a long time. It makes no sense for Lin to even bother having the Bai girl if he never actually trusts her like a core member. He should've ignored her or killed her from the beginning when she was too weak and unimportant to matter because now I find myself asking what's the difference between the Bai girl, goddess of Mercy, or the lady from cultivated gardens cause they all went to Lin Yuan with selfish goals but because of the timing some of them were accepted when he was weak and now the stronger people who have imo the same level of selfishness as any other ally he's meade don't matter cause they're too weak and now I keep seeing him saying he can only trust certain people and it's just annoying the crap out of me.
Lol I was wondering when we were going to get mentioned 🇺🇲🇺🇲🫡
Well it's been awhile since I've been in the comments section. But today I must return to pay respects to a true MAN. There have been many surprises and sad scenes so far, but this last stand of Velasco was a true tear jerker while somehow still being so action packed that my heart couldn't help but race even as I had to hold back tears. Most days I can't help but hate that more chapters aren't coming but for once I think I've read enough for one day. Signing off until next time, stay up my friends and give your dad a hug next time you see them. R.I.P. Velasco the best dad in the dimensional verse
yeah I was just about to say plus I'm pretty sure 7th page is going to fall in love with one of Lin Yuan's Fey's. most likely would be thorns of relinquish main body since it said it's only attracted to strong unique devouring Fey's way earlier
Exeggutor is the correct spelling.