LausDeo
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LausDeo3dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วhey finish it already stoopid autor, it's 24 chps of Harry Potter You are dragging to much and did not Even finish the first fking movie an there are 8 of them.
A/N: Don't crucify me, guys :'3- LausDeo26dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
esto fue muy estuúpido. autor si los próximos capítulos son así, no valen mi tiempo
I raised my eyebrows and gave him a reality shock. "No, someone else will," I turned around and called my reliable "Rebecca." - LausDeo1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
to much bullshit in order to create a cliffhanger
A/N: I actually thought about omitting the explanation of White Infinity, but I figured that since JJK is the manga that gives five explanations per chapter, it wouldn't be appropriate not to explain how I improved Limitless. - LausDeo2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
she is just asking if is Jon or kurama
"JON, IS THAT YOU?"-Robin - LausDeo3mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
give the man a purple lightsaber
"Tatiana promised me a lightsaber if I helped her land a hit on you."- I think that was the time when I promised her an individual speed-ship if she landed a hit on me, a type of spaceship for one pilot and no passengers, fully focused on speed. - LausDeo7mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
if it si Leah please save her author-san
"Spider…Man…" - LausDeo9mthตอบกลับถึง AnAmericanBoy
wrong, he is 14 or 15
(AN: SOME *** STUFF!) - LausDeo1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
don't like it, looks like metroman from megamind
And as the dust fell down. Everybody saw that the bank robbers were unconscious on the floor, and in the middle of it all, stood a tall, handsome man in his white and gold superman suit almost looking holy. - LausDeo1yrตอบกลับถึง Furytailedfox
and annoying
"Is simple. Derek here will lose control of the car and fall on the water and the two of you will die in this accident." The voice says "I can say that is... poetic justice." - LausDeo1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
mature
Also, just a question. Is it fine to write something in the future regarding MC and Loli Death seggs scene or wait till Death has a more adult body? Though I say loli, she's not the flat kid type but more like Rory Mercury or Shuten Douji sexy LEGAL loli XD. Just asking in case people start complaining about it when I end up doing it :P - LausDeo1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
autocorrector issues?
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - LausDeo1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 50 Another Day Of A Main Character in Marvel
- LausDeo1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
sorry man, this is as far as I can go. was interesting at the beginning but now for ME (just in case an a..hole wants to give his/her unwanted reply to my opinion) this story became boring AF (the slow pace and the constant intromision of the JL without the mc doing nothing). I'm dropping it
Ch 259 An Unbeatable Foe? - LausDeo1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
hey dude, FYI Fanny is a girl's name
Fanny was not originally from this world. He didn't know how or why he came to this world; all he knew was that he suddenly became a baby who could only cry when he opened his eyes. - LausDeo1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 12 Just a question(Important)
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yessssss
(A.N.: So, I read some people talk about how they forget the plot. So I have this idea of a recap. Should I continue or nah?) - LausDeo1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
hahahaha good one
"Martha…?"