Insane_Pumpkin

MORE... though maybe tommorow, I need to sleep as i just devoured this entire fanfic from chapter 1 without stop.

The only way you can earn money is scaming people as you can't even sell your body with a face that even your mother didn't love.

I read the conversation in italian accent before he said he was half itslian....

It's more about not using his other essences and overfocusing on his nen and healer essence while going to a random garbage dump he could find potential high tech lying around considering how much destruction Gotham goes through daily and how many villains use gadgets and weird machines.

Yeah because unless you are anty common sense it's obvious that perfect place for using crafting essence would be garbage dumb especialy as the essence mentioned upgrading existing items. So bassicly scavangeing and making his own tools and equpiment in his bag would be the most optimal route for surviving in Gotham for the MC. Also runing from batman by using nen was the most retarded thing he could do as he would 90% have allready placed a tracking device on MC and being more physicaly powerfull would put you on batman watch list. After healing those people he could bassicly insult batman for endangering normal people diss him for being at fault for the freaks messing up this city, point out his injuries and mental state and point out how he hates him and people like him but he just can't not healt those people when he can feel their suffering. Still would get on batman watchlist but would just be marked as a healer with an attitude that hates capes but would not disclose his other abilities.

Guesed as much, i read eragon about 6-8 years ago so didn't recall small details

The strain a the end is suppoed to be strain from body enchantment he did.

You could just make it so wild magic would put a strain on the body of the user as the raw magic is somehow unstable. Of course that could be pretty easly solved by using a medium like Ancient Language, staffs, something like philosopher's stone, magic circles etc... it would solve the OPnes of wild magic yet still leave way for MC finding better and better FOCUS for his magic. It would synergize nicely with LOTR if you consider Gandalf staff and the rings as magical foci. You could make him discover existence of magical veins and enchant them with the metorite metal for better durability and magic conductivity which would make him still able to cast absurd magic compared to other magic users of eragon universe. Add a bit of time to his stay with the dwarfs where he's knocked out by the strain and you could skip a good deal of rewriting but that's just my opinion.

I feel very called out here... Personally prefer 2nd choice even though it's propably harder to write but both are good. I hope the MC can take some inspiration from other stories and try learn some magic like reverse animagus from Harry Potter or develop unique magic like dragons from Draconic Deus. If you go with the 2nd choice please don't make the rider Male as it would feel kinda weird. You could try adding female OC in that case like an abandoned half elf girl that would normally die from urgals or something like that and be saved by the MC.

It's weird because it was about him being riderless and several times mentioned how it's sad and terrible for MC to not have a rider and be so lonely...