"you trash are you courting death. you dare to kidnap a jade beauty in front this young master" would have been a better.

Lets talk about the goods of the ff 1. its a haikyuu ff. 2. its a haikyuu ff and that's about it. Now for the bad 1. Shotacon (aunts thinking about a newborn. u need some help bro) 2. Training. MF is training at the age of 2 I thought the ff was chillin and here this dude is trying harding at the age 2. 3. Very slow start plus short chapters. as of writing this review there are 18chps and he was 7 years of age maybe more since he moved to japan. (Please understand that this review is a personal opinion and do give it a try before skipping. There not many chapters so it doesn't take much time plus not many haikyuu ff out there as well.)

this whole pronoun thing is cringe.

Not a fan of abilities that require luck. anyways it was good while it lasted but this is it for me. I hope the best for the author and his future work.

didn't even realise that was i was reading it as gomu gomuno lol

also his talking like he has feathers on his wings. didn't know dragons had feathers

remember the guy who spent a week or more to avenge a people he didn't know. lol

don't know how to swim, just throw yourself in the river. what could go wrong xD

is this gonna continue. like where she covinently forgets memorable moments. i mean u can forget things but u can also remember. like when she went on the river or swung on the rope.

isn't this a bit dumb though. its like saying your 1m height is different to my 1m height. I'm fine with him being lvl 20 going against lvl100 since in terms of games class and race gives different stats at same level but 1 unit of strength of should be equal to 1 unit of strength.

Its written in present tense. If u don't mind reading in present tense then give go if not then don't bother. ..................................................................

lmao u just can't handle criticism. tell if i'm wrong and say the first 10 chapters is not stupid. i didn't even write something misleading. i didn't even write the fact mc has a stripper name.

So read upto 10 chapters and i can't bring myself to read more. Basically, MC was arrogant in his school, no mention of him being the bully so just arrogant. And kids in his school didn't like it so they decided to kill him and his family. See how stupid this sounds and all his classmates knew about the plan the girls didn't like the plan but they sat on the sidelines and did nothing. Only two boys were against it but again nothing no idea if they were threatened or not but as you guessed it the plan went through and the kids brunt his house down along with his parents. MC survived due to his quirk but his parents were not so lucky. So anyways he gets temporarily adopted by mirko goes back to school breaks couple of bones of student there and is ploting revenge and i don't know how he'll avoid being the prime suspect and i don't wanna find out. So yeah i find it too stupid to read more.

Moooooreeee i need more

shocker isn't a superhuman but he is eren's mom killer. eren is spiderman and spider man is superstrong, the guy can lift a train. +he has superspeed now which is weird and underwhelming considering how it's been used. and he struggled like a bich to kill his mother's killer. there i read enough

and flash, did i read wrong or didn't he get the smashed around like loki did by hulk.

shocker isn't a street thug?

was expecting a lot when i read about author's promises of proper grammar, character development, etc. but the story is written in present tense and everytime i read my brain tries to read it in past tense in which most of the books are written. then there are fights which are meh, i still don't understand how flash survived the beating. the fight with shocker was not shocking(bad pun intended). this version of spider should have been unhinged with killings and all but it still feels weak. I understand he doesn't want him to become op from the start but he should be pretty op for street lvl thugs especially since he's not holding back.

moreeeee feed me more chapters

time for new adventure. First things first, lets punch a tree.