VicL
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Yeah, I rewrote the last few chapters. It just didn't seem to fit right, so... here's the rewrite version.
Marcy and Kate should be girls’ names
...dice rolls? I'm out.
'totally depended on luck' - I saw that and decided to immediately quit
If you're wondering what happened, I got vaccinated and these days I'm super weak... plus I got caught up in something else I wanted to try writing...
It's about how forgettable she is, and it keeps piling up.
...yeah, should have expected that. Definitely disappointed here, I'd still rather Gloriana and Aisling exchanged places in all events from the start, but we know enough about the author by now to expect nothing less. Maybe it's my mistake for rooting for the right girl (IMHO) from the very start. It seems here is where I drop this. I'm half-tempted to write my own version of Mech Touch as an alternative, but it's probably not worth the trouble.
Of course not. Their attack only kills brains. She doesn't have any.
Aisling, your biggest mistake was kidnapping him instead of seducing him. If you just had the right timing and occasion, simply wearing a short skirt could have had him at your side and on your side long ago. But obviously, the author wouldn't allow it, so...
Why does he sound like dinner...?
...just how big is this so-called 'village' of theirs??
Here's another girl needs to add stats to intelligence
Wait, you knew this was coming and you're only now starting to fortify?!
To begin with, both of you ran off unprepared. Whatever happened to equipment and supply preparation? Healing potions? Armor? Don't tell me you can't afford it now.
No, that's not farming. Kana was farming. Ceilie was attempting suicide.