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Yesssssss!!!! Welcome back.
The author should at least try to use proper pronouns. Calls females he and males she. It's annoying to read.
Ewww!!!
Bold move there; with your use of that word. Wasn't really necessary cuz it makes Calvin seem like he's back to being a drug dealer before all this happened. There's also been an obvious change in your writing style since the hiatus. Still though, glad to have you back.
This way if speaking is unnecessary
No need for the southern-way of speaking for Ace and Sabo. You can use a regular dialect.
Yeeeeeessssssss!!!! More, more, more. Please don't say you don't have any talent, you obviously do. Please don't stop writing. Yes, make a continuation of this fanfic, it's one of the best TWD fics I've read.
Very good fanfic. Would recommend to any walking dead fan.
This was a Dogshit read...................
That's...not a valid reason for slashing his eyes. "Eye slashing" injustice would be something like his daughters being kidnapped, sold into slavery to a world noble and the marines refusing to save them or something along those lines. Justice did not fail in this instance.