NinetyThreeDegrees
Just a guy looking to sharpen his writing skills.
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She*Get the right pronouns
The novel keeps propping up this Ryu guy but doesn't give him any push back. The scene im reading right now is boring. Tge part where Elena keeps praising Ryu to high heaven is a classic mistake that some author make in writing. Its show not tell. If you keep telling people about his achievments instead of showing them it makes the story infinitly more boring.
figuratively speaking
I agree need to use his because the dragon is male if you use her that would indicate the dragon is female which it is not.
its been upgraded to rage
maybe angels are gender fluid ?
Well watching different types of media could help and or reading different books could also assist you in getting some ideas for example: 1. Spectacular Spiderman 2. Young Justice 3. Samurai Jack 4. Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles (2003) 5. Percy Jackson 6. Psyren 7. Marvel Movies (MCU) 8. Rosario + Vampire 9. Hellsing Ultimate 10. Tegami Bachi Heck You can also play video games 1. Megaman Zero series/zx 2. The World Ends With You 3. Persona 3 4 5 Ect....
I feel you yow kinda oozes painful vibes
if you don't mind me asking what the actual saying is ?
if I can recall yow is another meaning for ouch
all that from a single interaction i know that happens in real life sometimes but wow just wow
oh sure when the protagonist does it its fine but when someone else does it its creepy
oh sure when the protagonist does it its fine but when someone else does it its creepy
isn't that a bit vain though ? And again it depends on a person depending on geography, Culture, religion and personality people might react in a different way using the same rating system over and over again will make the story repetative and boring.