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This book has so much potential. The intensity of the first two chapters give a display of that. The writing style needs a bit of improvement but with its state right now the story can be easily understood. Overall the book is interesting. Keep working on the book and show more ideas that other books never had. Good work author.

Very good story and characters discipline, enjoy your book so much, will recommend to everyone, I’m waiting for the next chapter to be released, keep up your good work, you’re excellent 👍😊

I truly admire the intricacy of the details woven into your story, creating a rich tapestry that draws readers into the narrative. Nevertheless, I believe the writing would benefit from embracing a "show, not tell" approach. Keep up the good work author!

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Well, the way the story looks in terms of reading, it's not exactly the most pleasing to look at. There are too many paragraphs and some grammar mistakes. But the story is fun to see progress.

This one sure is an apocalyptic stateI'm kind of lost for some statements, could be because i am not familiar to it. But overall, the story is interesting. I like how the author write the sceneries in detailed.It seems the author really want to share what is on his/her mind.I'll be binge reading this if i got time⌚😭👀

The writing style here is unique and intriguing. You can tell the author has a clear mental picture of everything described. The story opens with a bang, but it’s not difficult to catch on to what’s happening after that. If the updating stability stays good, this could be a great one! Good work!

Oh, a star wars story. It is actually really good to read and I like it. I think the author put it in the wrong section and this story should be under Sci-Fi. I believe that this will gather more attention and collections xD

I delved into this story because I myself am a huge Sci-Fi fan. The genre is not as heavily explored on Webnovel as some other genres. With that being said, let's jump into my review. The description is great, and the updates are consistent. The characters do not really stand out during the beginning of the story because the tale seems to more so describe a sequence of events without a clear main character. The world background is impressive. The story development is good, but the grammar could use some work. Some words need to be capitalized and periods need to be placed. One thing I would recommend regarding character design is to flesh out how they look, what their motives are, how they think, and then display what is happening in their life. Still, this is a nice tale to explore. I welcome you to take a look at my completed fanfic "Avatar: Lingering Tensions", you can also look at it to see what I value as a writer. Since that story is a sequel, it may be beneficial to read the first 1-3 chapter(s) of "Avatar: Macai's Journey". Best wishes author.

Absolutely, here are a few more variants: Title: "A Literary Odyssey!" Review: Reading this book was like traversing the vast Sahara. The characters were as layered and intriguing as the sand dunes that stretch across the horizon. The plot was as unpredictable as a desert wind, full of whirlwind twists and turns. Every chapter was akin to uncovering a hidden oasis, providing a refreshing burst of narrative. In short, if you're searching for a story as captivating as a journey through an endless desert, this book is your trusty camel. Rating: 5/5 stars. As exhilarating as the sight of a desert sunrise!