Concerns

OK! So, I never thought I would have to explain my story decisions or REPORT A REVIEW THAT IGNORED MY CLARIFICATION RELATED TO MY OWN FUCKING STORY. At that point you chose to write a negative review, you CHOSE to bash the story, when I took away your reason for doing so.

If an author clarifies a plot point, then the way they clarify it is a done deal, take it for what it says. Don't ignore it, bash the story in a review, and then tell all the fans who like the story why you don't like it.

Grow the hell up dude. If you don't want to read it, then don't read it. It's simple.

Relating to what this is about, I've said on comments a million times that yes, to an extent the system is controlling him.

A better word for that would be that it's manipulating him. It's not hard to see that just from the story alone, disrupting his entire life and not really caring about what he wants.

So to say he's a slave would be the wrong word. And I even clarified it with them, and they just...ignored me? And said I was sugarcoating it? No, I fucking clarified my own story like any author hates to do.

If you have a problem with how I'm writing my story or a question, say something about it politely. Let's have a discussion. Not a case where you close your mind and fucking ignore what I say my story is.