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Transformers Galvatron Self Insert (TFP)

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What is Transformers Galvatron Self Insert (TFP)

อ่านนิยาย Transformers Galvatron Self Insert (TFP) โดย ผู้เขียน Devastator_21 ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.What would happen if you woke up one day in a different universe where you have the memories and body of a gladiator turned revolutionary were once noble ideals were thrown to the way side and you bec...

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What would happen if you woke up one day in a different universe where you have the memories and body of a gladiator turned revolutionary were once noble ideals were thrown to the way side and you became the very thing you swore to destroy. Oh and don't forget you're a bloody robot, probably one of the most hated beings ever but hopefully you can change and save your new species from certain extinction. Hey thanks for coming by this is one of my first attempts at writing a good story i hope you enjoy and any advice or criticism is encouraged i got inspired by the story (How very logical TFP SI.) By Tomb Spyder so you may see similarities but my story will branch off it's just he is a really good writer and there was not much i could change at the beginning I've also posted on Spacebattles https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/transformers-megatron-peace-through-tyranny-tfp-s-i.1113121/

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Na vastidão sem fim do mundo imenso e sem limites, um trio de criminosos exilados do majestoso Império de Balydian se vê lançado em um jogo de destinos incertos. À margem da sociedade, Naes Udarai, uma habil guerreira de uma tribo anarquista, Luíse Draco, o ágil mercenário com habilidades arcanas e um passado obscuro marcado em suas cicatrizes, e Gareth Weaver, ex-guarda real expulso por sua traição, embarcam em uma jornada audaciosa em direção ao desconhecido. Fugindo das garras do Império que um dia serviram, esses renegados procuram um novo começo em terras não exploradas, atravessando fronteiras e enfrentando desafios inimagináveis. Enquanto se infiltram em sociedades clandestinas e desvendam conspirações sombrias, o trio descobre que as oportunidades são tão incomensuráveis quanto as terras que habitam. No entanto, eles também se deparam com dilemas morais, testes de lealdade e escolhas que moldarão não apenas o seu próprio destino, mas o destino de reinos inteiros. Essa uma saga de intriga, lealdade e autodescoberta, ambientada num mundo fantasioso que desafia a lógica e transcende as fronteiras da imaginação. À medida que Naes, Luíse e Gareth navegam pelas complexidades desse universo sem fim, eles descobrem que o verdadeiro poder reside não apenas nas habilidades que possuem, mas na força de seus laços e na capacidade de enfrentar o desconhecido, encontrando oportunidades onde menos se espera. ~ilustrações da capa por Kalmahul https://mertun.artstation.com/

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Devastator_21
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I have to say, as the author, im immensely proud of this piece of work please do read this it's an absolute banger

EvilBlueCrystal
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You'd expect an epic plot, akin to "One Shall Fall, One Shall Stand" but all you get is a Clash of Clans building journey. There's no grasp of the concept of dialogue constantly resorting to wrong formatting and misuse of first person viewpoint instead of third person for his initial state. For the characters there's not enough background about them and as for the plot the protagonist backstory was that he attempted to a traverse different universe and failed, but it would have made more sense if they'd crashed on an unknown planet after the Unicorn battle, explored the planet, scavenged parts, and healed his injuries while upgrading, they even have a "system" that could have allowed for skill and information creation, tech creation and building skills. But no, the environment is left undescribed, and they dive headfirst into picking up parts with no context or details. The pacing is all over the place, missing crucial in-between moments, a disconnected series of events [Who, How, What, When, Where, Why]. The state of the planet, the protagonist's abilities, the scrap bots, the tech, and how it works – none of this is said. The sentences are either fragmented or excessively lengthy, feel out of place or not related to each other, making it hard to follow the narrative, a chaotic mess of, [In my spare time, i spent on my new decepticon army it's only a prototype at the moment it is going to replace the vehicon troopers as the main battle force of the new decepticon army if it goes to plan.] Interactions and dialogues are devoid of meaning, characters simply exchange empty words like, "Where are you?", "Send me your location", "Come to my location". The protagonist reveals unreasonable information without thinking, and everyone blindly follows him. Character descriptions are casually thrown in without any real detail "It looks like... ", "Imagine that...", no way anyone knows how they look without saying anything about their parts, body, accessories, weapons, shape. As for subsequent chapters, they're just as aimless as the first but become worse thanks to the misuse ofAI. The story lacks purpose and progression, gathering items lacks context and buildup, rendering it uninteresting. Pacing shifts abruptly from fast to a crawl with one chapter that consists of nothing but the protagonist talking to themselves and the next is slightly better but fails to give any importance to the good guys point of view and their sudden raid, and they also speak in the first person.

one_of_his
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I really like this story and the idea behind it

GenYase
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Rating it 5* before reading anything, will change this later on probably (if i wont forget). Leaving the 5* for villain in transformers i love this stuff. I can only hope for Decepticons or whatever his faction will be will have more "menacing" looks

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