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The term Evil, meaning profoundly immoral, malevolent, or wicked; is pervaded as such through heinous acts, bloodshed, and acts of deviance. As a noun, this term can be considered a supernatural force that coincides with the soul of man. Though man is not completely at the mercy of Evil, as Man has thought of many ways of suppression through faith and the laws that govern right and wrong. Now, what if this said Evil was not suppressed inside of man, with it running rampant. Becoming not a trait but the very container it was designed to inhabit. What a tragic fate for anyone who's been given a life of such corruption. In this world, those deemed to be Evil are merely a product of Man's failure to create peace and promote kindness. With this, I hope that any living being that comes across this a corrupted individual slays them for they are no more than slaves to ravenous insatiable human desire.
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The cries of a baby are heard, followed by the cheering of nurses and doctors on birth of a new life. A healthy child of Man.
It's a boy! Oh, what a good day it is, miss!
The atmosphere begins to change as everyone notices the mother. Haggard with small beady eyes, delirious with a look of horror. The staff sprang into action after noticing the mother was getting stiff and cold. Alas, they couldn't save her, with her leaving the world with a quiet wisper. "My apologies, world". With the celebration of life turning into the mourning of death no one said word, as the change in atmosphere shielded them, from her last words. A few weeks go by and after a somber burial ceremony the baby was shuffled into adoptive care.
The baby, left with no mother or family to take care of, was adopted by one of the nurses and named En. The reason for such an adoption was for the inheritance
En has from his mother and her family.
The nurse named Diane Fiado, was raised by a low class family and became a nurse after college at the age of 29. She was married with no children and her husband and her had a tough time raising En due to his abnormal habits and the wierd atmosphere that was around him, also the thought of greed they had due to his inheritance.
Two years passed, and both Diane and her husband couldn't handle living with the baby. Soon, they both agreed to burn the house down and leave En inside to die while they took the inheritance and moved on from the fiasco. But before the plan was put into play, the next mourning, they died from nothing. At least, that was what the autopsy showed, and Diane and her husband were considered as both having sudden arrhythmic death syndrome. With the case shutting cold.
Another family came to adopt the baby for his inheritance, but instead of killing the baby, they left him upon the doorstep of an old man with a note stating his first name. They claimed that En had run away and somehow got the inheritance.
Abandoned at age 2, left upon the shop front of an old man's house with a note; The Peculiar kid En is taken in and adopted, with the note stating "Name:En" is scrapped and almost forgotten. The old man, named Jake Neyrar, also titled crazy man due to his goal of eternal life and the supranatural quest of finding truth.
Jake raises En for 5 years before he understands En's differences with children and sees their commonalities in their traits and addressed En's Weird aura as his insanity. En was weird because he never cried, rarely spoke, and gave off the feeling of being an omniscient ruler. With that being said, the boy loved this old man of his, for all the things he learned and had been given and detested all the people he was raised by before.
Yet his father Jake saw the hate in his sons eyes and started teaching him to love and enjoy peace. At the age of 7, En was put in the third grade to start his studies. As En didn't want to have a social life he studied, on his free time he was taught by Jake how to forage, tie nots, read a map, math concepts, and was introduced to his fathers research, all while enjoying peace and soon earning the title of genius. At the age of 13, his freshmen year of high school, his old man Jake passed at the age of 67, and that's when his first tear was shed. He baried Jake in the backyard and moved on to continue his father's dream for eternal life.
I'm a newbie author and I still haven't fully grasped second person narration and am stuck in an impasse. If you have any tips on how to keep in the lines and maybe ideas on abilities please comment!