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The Taleweaver

นักเขียน: StenDuring
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What is The Taleweaver

อ่านนิยาย The Taleweaver โดย ผู้เขียน StenDuring ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.One man to change a lifeTwo to change a worldAn outworlder comes to Otherworldwhere words come truewhere he comes trueThe TaleweaverThis is a story of mine from 2003. It's long since finished, or at l...

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One man to change a life Two to change a world An outworlder comes to Otherworld where words come true where he comes true The Taleweaver This is a story of mine from 2003. It's long since finished, or at least two out of three planned books are written. There will be no third. Now while each book is a finished story in its own right there are loose ends after book two that will never get tied together. So, dear reader, you have been warned before you decide to embark upon this journey. Gorgeous cover by Chryiss

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Princess and The assasin

"The axe forgets, but the tree remembers." She said while pulling the sword on the Queen's chest. The blood kept dripping from the edge of the sword. "You better don't mess with my people or else i will kill you and your damn son." "Who would it be?" The Queen's voice filled the assembly hall. One of the servants suddenly barge in. "Your majesty, I'm so sorry, but you need to come with me. Someone barge in on his highness room and tied him up. The perpetrator left a message on his highness mouth." "You better watch your move. I'm just keeping my eyes on you. Stop provoking me or you will find your son head in the front gate of the palace. I will feed his head to the hungry crows and birds while his body, I will feed them to the hungry and poor people of this nation. I will shed his blood to quench the thirst of this nation." "The nation are still the same. It's still a hell for people to live in." "Prepare everything, I'm going back to the palace." She said while reading a book. "To pretend, Your highness?" One of her companion said mockingly. "I will save my people even they are in hell. I will let my mother rest in peace. I will let my father have a peaceful mind and sleep. I won't run away. I will face them. I have the five of you and I trust you." Her highness voice sounds miserably. "But your back and your hands, your higness!" Seo hwi sounds worried. He's on of my trusted protector. "It will be fine. We will start our journey before the break of dawn. Prepare the horses and sharpens our sword. Sell the palanquin and my royal things. Buy a commoner robe and arrow. Move!" I looked up the sky. "This will be the beginning of bloodbath."

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NOTE THIS IS A CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK REVIEW AND PROBABLY DOES NOT RELATE TO CURRENT STATE OF NOVEL *You can always delete if you care that much about the rating* First your novel is written like a movie script. Don't do that, those are for directors, not readers and aren't fun to read. Also dont put a enter space in a quotes paragraph. End paragraph and make new quote paragraph. There was too much info dumping, you need to make it gradually appear as your world setting needs a lot. I know its easiest to do it all at once, but it makes readers want to read less like me, to be honest I can't even remember much about what I was supposed to. I would reread once more a bit slower, your spelling looks generally god so far (maybe errors in parts I didnt read), but you need to put some commas in certain places like before and (most of time it is needed there). Too much scene changes. If you change it like that you should just write it so it makes more sense and flows better for reader. We can't see what your imagining. Also don't do #, better to just - - - or . . . or _________ or ===== to split scenes. # Just weird from a thrid perspective, even if you use, it spam it. To make a line about big enough fe a phone so 20 taps ish, you dont want to forget what readers might be resding on. Describe 5 senses more, it felt 2D. Also you should work on detailing a little more, plus make more relatable things. Fourth chapter in I still have no idea whats going on other than they landed on another planet (possibly) and the story of Arthur (mightve got name wrong) Im a stop reading now as I already wrote enough, hopefully this helps.

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Just your average shameless author selfplugging his own story. Well, and collecting the daily EXP for writing a review as well. Science fantasy. Space ships and magic. Even dragons. Oh, and there's mecha as well. Any of the above central to the story? Naeh. Two men on a journey, however, is. Is this an all five star story? Hardly. Thorough editing should yield a five star writing and it's updated daily. I'll collect those. While I did give myself the other three stars as well I guess story, character and world is subjective. I don't see a reason why any of them should drop below four though.

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